Jeb and Gurmal - Nordic Blogs : Our holiday in Norway
Jeb and Gurmal - Nordic Blogs : Our holiday in Norway
4 comments
Daniel.s 6P - I really like your blog, because it includes lots of fun stuff that you did in Norway and made me want to go there. You could add more colour in the main paragraph. I also like the way you wrote a lot about why you want to write a blog.
Oki - I like the way you write your blog about something we have been learning in class. To Improve you could have more pictures and less text.
Julia - I really like that u used our lesson to your blog and made it REALLY eye catching
Jeb And Gurmal 6P - I really liked the way we quickly summarised our holiday in Norway and how we added description! To improve you should have added more in your about me section! Also we liked how we added brackets to make it sound like we were talking to the reader:D
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4 comments
Daniel.s 6P - I really like your blog, because it includes lots of fun stuff that you did in Norway and made me want to go there. You could add more colour in the main paragraph. I also like the way you wrote a lot about why you want to write a blog.
Oki - I like the way you write your blog about something we have been learning in class. To Improve you could have more pictures and less text.
Julia - I really like that u used our lesson to your blog and made it REALLY eye catching
Jeb And Gurmal 6P - I really liked the way we quickly summarised our holiday in Norway and how we added description! To improve you should have added more in your about me section! Also we liked how we added brackets to make it sound like we were talking to the reader:D